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This week we are learning to understand what being in the right place at the right time means. We are also coming up with some tips to help us stay in the right place at the right time.

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Thia is my anamtion I worked on today

Dear Council, My name is Avah O’Donnell I live a 45 toi street Otaki Beach. it has came to my attention that you are putting windmills around my property.it is up to you but if my family get hurt it is all your fault. I don’t want to get you in trouble but it is not a good idea. so please don’t do this. If you put these windmills next to my house I will not be able to get to sleep because they are so noisy so please don’t put the windmills next to my house. I am sure that you have some other place for these revolting things, if you do not move these ugly pieces of dirt I will take this fother. You are not going to put these UGLY things in my Glameras house if you do this going to get very very ugly so please do not do this Will get very ugly From Avah

Dear Council,
 My name is Avah O’Donnell  I live a 45 toi street Otaki Beach. it has came to my attention that you are putting  windmills around my property.it is up to you but if my family get  hurt it is all your fault. I don’t want to get you in trouble but it is not a good  idea.


These windmills are going to roing my specktacular view so then I not be able to have a cup of tea and a biscuit so please don’t do this.

If you put these windmills next to my house I will not be able to get to sleep because they are so noisy so please don’t put the windmills next to my house.



I  am sure that you have some other place for these revolting things, if you do not move these ugly pieces of dirt I will take this fother. You are not going to put these UGLY things in my 
  Glameras house if you do this going to get very very ugly so please do not do this

Will get very ugly

From Avah

This is a letter to the councill because people are putting windmills in my lovely house.

Dear Council,
 My name is Avah O’Donnell  I live a 45 toi street Otaki Beach. it has came to my attention that you are putting  windmills around my property.it is up to you but if my family get  hurt it is all your fault. I don’t want to get you in trouble but it is not a good  idea.


These windmills are going to roing my specktacular view so then I not be able to have a cup of tea and a biscuit so please don’t do this.

If you put these windmills next to my house I will not be able to get to sleep because they are so noisy so please don’t put the windmills next to my house.



I  am sure that you have some other place for these revolting things, if you do not move these ugly pieces of dirt I will take this fother. You are not going to put these UGLY things in my 
  Glameras house if you do this going to get very very ugly so please do not do this

Will get very ugly

From Avah

this is a litter to the councill because people are putting windmills in my lovely house.

Dear Council,

My name is Avah O’Donnell  I live a 45 toi street Otaki Beach. it has came to my attention that you are putting  windmills around my property.it is up to you but if my family get hurt it is all your fault. I don’t want to get you in trouble but it is not a good  idea.

These windmills are going to roing my specktacular view so then I not be able to have a cup of tea and a biscuit so please don’t do this.

If you put these windmills next to my house I will not be able to get to sleep because they are so noisy so please don’t put the windmills next to my house.

I  am sure that you have some other place for these revolting things, if you do not move these ugly pieces of dirt I will take this fother. You are not going to put these UGLY things in my  

 Glameras house if you do this going to get very very ugly so please do not do this

Will get very ugly

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